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Post by feralcat on Sept 1, 2023 13:04:10 GMT
this is a thread for my wips excerpts, but feel free to share yours too! made thanks to hearteyedcat 's advice.
this is a paragraph from my in-progress novel -- "The Blind Leads" which I started somewhere in July this year and made big progress before abandoning it for a while. Now trying to pick it up from where I've left it. (Context for the paragraph, if you want: Katarina's (the mc) a newcomer to a city with very little money and she was offered to stay in a very expensive hotel by a random woman. this is the morning after where she realises that she can't quite pay for everything)
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Post by mrsmoe on Sept 3, 2023 3:18:20 GMT
I don't really have a lot to say (and for that I apologize), but this is really well done and nicely worded! I really like the comparison of consumerists as wallets most of all~
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