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Post by mrsmoe on Nov 28, 2023 6:38:23 GMT
Fairy Garden Lungs by Azure (me!)Bede has a rapidly-advancing case of hanahaki disease. The problem is, he insists that he has no romantic feelings for anyone.My LONG-intended-to-be-written platonic hanahaki disease fanfic, featuring Bede and Opal from Pokemon Sword and Shield! Plays by the rules of "dying due to hiding your emotions, and you need to say how you feel to be cured", rather than anything about onesided love that needs to be reciprocated. 4.6k words! This is another fic where I'm unfamiliar with the characters, but this is very lovely! Super wholesome and using the hanahaki disease for a case of familial love is super original. Begging and crying on my knees for Opal to be my grandma rn.
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 1, 2023 17:00:13 GMT
This week I've decided to do something a bit different. Instead of a story or an essay, I want to share an outline I've written for a book I want to make called Inhumane. This is a first draft, so I'm sharing it in hopes of getting some feedback or suggestions (for example, I feel like the ending should have a more emotional impact). It is very weird and bizarre, but that's pretty much the intention. I love writing that kind of stuff. (Here I go again putting creepy deer imagery into everything I make....) MASSIVE TW: gore, animal death, parental abuse, pedophila (nothing explicit happens, but one character is a pedo) Inhumane Outline by MrsMoe
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Post by jelly on Dec 1, 2023 20:36:52 GMT
Wargh, I've been too busy these to sit down and read through things these past couple of weeks so I'm going to try and get through everything I've missed. Apologies in advance for the long post! (and also for any incoherent wording, I'm a bit sleepy right now ) So I haven't written anything new for this week, but I did want to share a script for a short film I wrote about a year ago. It didn't get a lot of attention on the site I originally shared it on, but I'm hoping maybe you guys might enjoy it. Rebirth by MrsMoeOooh rebirth indeed! (<-- sucker for these sort of themes) I do like the use of the womb imagery and the ending was neat! Sort of a "try, try again" sort of mood towards Mara's family, I suppose... What medium were you think the film to be in when you wrote this? (Live action? Animated? etc) or were you more focused on the story itself? Comfortable Silence by Azure (me!) Rouge took to this new "having friends" business much easier than Shadow seemed to be. Although how rude Shadow could be at times certainly wasn't helping his case. (Or: Rouge tries to grow closer to Shadow, who is autistic, and finds that all of her attempts to bond with him trigger his sensory issues.)
As I say in the author's note, this 'fic was written for the zine that I headed, which was all about autistic characters in animation! It's 1.5k words exactly, and I'm very pleased with it, especially since I've never written any of these characters before. Awww! This was so sweet! I really like the moment where Rogue tries to recontextualize all her previous befriending attempts, and how everyone else is alright with him going at his own pace + whatnot! Also!! Yay on making that zine! What a fun concept to theme it around! I'm happy to announce that I've officially started a Medium account! I want to use it to write essays about pretty much anything my crappy little autistic brain hyperfixates on. I hope I can someday earn money from doing it, but for now I'm just content with writing love letters to my favorite media. Anyways, here's my ramble on one of my favorite games and why I get so emotional over it. Yume Nikki: The Loneliest Game Ever Made by MrsMoeCongrats on the medium account! Also Yesss shaking your hand on RPG maker horror, I really need to play more of them since I tend to enjoy it every time! Definitely agree with the "up to interpretation" nature of it being a key component as to why it's so well loved for so long. Your own reading into the game is well articulated, and the end aside XD Fairy Garden Lungs by Azure (me!)Bede has a rapidly-advancing case of hanahaki disease. The problem is, he insists that he has no romantic feelings for anyone.My LONG-intended-to-be-written platonic hanahaki disease fanfic, featuring Bede and Opal from Pokemon Sword and Shield! Plays by the rules of "dying due to hiding your emotions, and you need to say how you feel to be cured", rather than anything about onesided love that needs to be reciprocated. 4.6k words! I'm usually not a fan of hanahaki disease as a trope (along with every other soulmate trope for similar reasons) but in this platonic way it's really sweat! :-] Just, poor guy... having that sort of internal expectations as to how he's supposed to conduct himself.... This week I've decided to do something a bit different. Instead of a story or an essay, I want to share an outline I've written for a book I want to make called Inhumane. This is a first draft, so I'm sharing it in hopes of getting some feedback or suggestions (for example, I feel like the ending should have a more emotional impact). It is very weird and bizarre, but that's pretty much the intention. I love writing that kind of stuff. (Here I go again putting creepy deer imagery into everything I make....) MASSIVE TW: gore, animal death, parental abuse, pedophila (nothing explicit happens, but one character is a pedo) Inhumane Outline by MrsMoeI feel like this sort of snowball effect that Felix goes through can only really end in something like what you already have planned. But for an emotional circle, maybe the last person he sees or "takes revenge on" before his end could be Marilyn? (For betraying him, or some such justification)
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Post by jelly on Dec 1, 2023 20:58:52 GMT
DIY Date by JellyfishLover for TinyFandomFlash! Summary: With all of Type Praha’s team away on business, it’s up to Chikako to try and fix Hiro-chan and salvage their day of hanging out. Warnings for vague spoilers for the ending of Tonari no Robot, non-sexual nudity (think the level teen books are on). Also, a sentient robot is taken partially apart in this, but feels no pain towards this procedure. I haven't been writing too much lately, other than picking at some WIPs occasionally. Take this quick thing I made when thinking about the anatomy of this robot for a bit too long!
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Post by feralcat on Dec 2, 2023 9:45:16 GMT
This week I've decided to do something a bit different. Instead of a story or an essay, I want to share an outline I've written for a book I want to make called Inhumane. This is a first draft, so I'm sharing it in hopes of getting some feedback or suggestions (for example, I feel like the ending should have a more emotional impact). It is very weird and bizarre, but that's pretty much the intention. I love writing that kind of stuff. (Here I go again putting creepy deer imagery into everything I make....) MASSIVE TW: gore, animal death, parental abuse, pedophila (nothing explicit happens, but one character is a pedo) Inhumane Outline by MrsMoeOoh, this is brutal! I don't often read gore-y stories, but the outline seems very interesting. I like books with protagonists not being perfect or even good people and yours seems just like that. Also, may I suggest an ending or maybe an epilogue scene with the deer feasting on the corpse of Felix himself for some cyclical ending?
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 2, 2023 10:21:39 GMT
Wargh, I've been too busy these to sit down and read through things these past couple of weeks so I'm going to try and get through everything I've missed. Apologies in advance for the long post! (and also for any incoherent wording, I'm a bit sleepy right now ) So I haven't written anything new for this week, but I did want to share a script for a short film I wrote about a year ago. It didn't get a lot of attention on the site I originally shared it on, but I'm hoping maybe you guys might enjoy it. Rebirth by MrsMoeOooh rebirth indeed! (<-- sucker for these sort of themes) I do like the use of the womb imagery and the ending was neat! Sort of a "try, try again" sort of mood towards Mara's family, I suppose... What medium were you think the film to be in when you wrote this? (Live action? Animated? etc) or were you more focused on the story itself? Well, I don't have much talent when it comes to animation, as I'm very much a beginner artist, and I don't have the resources to commission an animator, so I was expecting it to get adapted for live action (I entered it into a screenwriting contest a year ago, but it didn't win anything). I would love it if it was animated though. Ideally, I would want everything I've ever written to get depicted through animation.
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Post by jelly on Dec 2, 2023 15:06:52 GMT
Well, I don't have much talent when it comes to animation, as I'm very much a beginner artist, and I don't have the resources to commission an animator, so I was expecting it to get adapted for live action (I entered it into a screenwriting contest a year ago, but it didn't win anything). I would love it if it was animated though. Ideally, I would want everything I've ever written to get depicted through animation. I see! I can definitely could see how the motifs you used here (and how you tend to depict things in general) could work well in animation!
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 8, 2023 8:45:40 GMT
DIY Date by JellyfishLover for TinyFandomFlash! Summary: With all of Type Praha’s team away on business, it’s up to Chikako to try and fix Hiro-chan and salvage their day of hanging out. Warnings for vague spoilers for the ending of Tonari no Robot, non-sexual nudity (think the level teen books are on). Also, a sentient robot is taken partially apart in this, but feels no pain towards this procedure. I haven't been writing too much lately, other than picking at some WIPs occasionally. Take this quick thing I made when thinking about the anatomy of this robot for a bit too long! Another source material I'm unfamiliar with. Still really cute though! Congrats to Chikako for her sick robo gf.
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 15, 2023 21:12:23 GMT
Alright, so after taking a break last week, I've started a short story that's a little different. It's a pretty odd concept and where I'm going with it isn't really apparent in what I've written so far. I hope you'll all like it nonetheless. Junko-San Loves You! by MrsMoe
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Post by Azure on Dec 16, 2023 2:53:06 GMT
Alright, so after taking a break last week, I've started a short story that's a little different. It's a pretty odd concept and where I'm going with it isn't really apparent in what I've written so far. I hope you'll all like it nonetheless. Junko-San Loves You! by MrsMoe Oh FUCK YES. Tulpas make GREAT starting points for horror stories, especially considering the amount of real-life stories about trying to create a tulpa that goes wrong. Or at least, I suspect this is the setup for a horror story.
I've only read one other story with this concept, and that's "Hey, Tojiko"! You can check that story out, too, if you want. I recommend it.
I'm SOOOO looking forward to what this ends up being!!! I am eagerly awaiting!
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 16, 2023 5:44:18 GMT
Alright, so after taking a break last week, I've started a short story that's a little different. It's a pretty odd concept and where I'm going with it isn't really apparent in what I've written so far. I hope you'll all like it nonetheless. Junko-San Loves You! by MrsMoe Oh FUCK YES. Tulpas make GREAT starting points for horror stories, especially considering the amount of real-life stories about trying to create a tulpa that goes wrong. Or at least, I suspect this is the setup for a horror story.
I've only read one other story with this concept, and that's "Hey, Tojiko"! You can check that story out, too, if you want. I recommend it.
I'm SOOOO looking forward to what this ends up being!!! I am eagerly awaiting!HEY TOJIKO IS RAD!!!! Thank you so much for sending this to me. Also, you're right about it being a horror story. Fortunately, I don't feel bad about our stories being too similar. Mine has its horror coming from a different place.
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Post by feralcat on Dec 16, 2023 17:40:31 GMT
Wow, what a month, huh? I didn't write anything at all except this little essay about transphobia and Fridays. Enjoy!!
You can also find my essay on my website >here<
I will also add all the new stories that you've guys added here to the main post very soon. Sorry for the inactivity!
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Post by Azure on Dec 17, 2023 0:04:29 GMT
Wow, what a month, huh? I didn't write anything at all except this little essay about transphobia and Fridays. Enjoy!! You can also find my essay on my website >here<I will also add all the new stories that you've guys added here to the main post very soon. Sorry for the inactivity!
I love this!!! You put a lot of concepts into words that I've struggled with in the past. "Transgenders aren't real" Nothing's real, bitch, let's get you a sandwich
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 20, 2023 18:15:27 GMT
Wow, what a month, huh? I didn't write anything at all except this little essay about transphobia and Fridays. Enjoy!!
You can also find my essay on my website >here<
I will also add all the new stories that you've guys added here to the main post very soon. Sorry for the inactivity!
This is a wonderful essay and it tackles a lot of philosophical concepts I've always wondered about. I think a lot about how so much unnecessary bullshit that makes us miserable (....like capitalism) could be so easily dropped if we all just stopped participating in it, but we're so obsessed with our imaginary rules about life that we can't. It applies to so many things, especially gender.
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Post by mrsmoe on Dec 22, 2023 17:21:45 GMT
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